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Amy! This is so great! Those last lines, and the wonderful build-up. A sweet ending to a guy who clearly deserved it. Brava.🕸️

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Thank you so much Mary! This was a fun prompt to work on. The poem sort of just came to me. ☺️🤣

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And you opened the door.😂

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This is one of the most unique verses I have ever heard. Your pacing was conversational and almost playful. It flowed very smoothly. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.

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I love this reflection Thomas! I'm so glad you liked it 🥰. Your comments always have a unique perspective that I appreciate so much. Thank you! 🙏

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